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Sleepless nights, wasted days
Easily done in many ways.

Remember what
You forgot to do.
Forge again
But remember that too.

Think of one
Who caught your eye.
And know it was they
who made you cry.

Worry about who
Is next in line.
Will someone close to you
Pay the ultimate fine?

Will you win the game,
How easy will it be?
Is the cat having kittens,
Or is she a he?

Easily done in many ways
Sleepless nights, wasted days.
©2008-2009 ~Ginger-Paws
:iconginger-paws:

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I had to write a poem for my Literature class. We're doing a 6 week writing workshop and yesterday I just really had some inspiration to write the poem assignment. This is what I came up with, though I think I might change the last quatrain.

Opinions please! I want this to be good.

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:iconapple2199:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

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The tooth fairy teaches kids that they can sell body parts for money.
:iconaustrailian-dragon:
:clap:

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How many bites does it take to get to the chewy center of a cupcake..? owo;
:iconginger-paws:
Thank you!!

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:rose: Diligo est amo oxygen , diligo est a plures species res , diligo levo nos sursum qua nos belong , totus vos postulo est diligo!

:rose: Love is like oxygen, love is a many splendored thing, love lifts us up where we belong, all you need is love!
:iconginger-paws:
Aw, sanks Apple!

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:rose: Diligo est amo oxygen , diligo est a plures species res , diligo levo nos sursum qua nos belong , totus vos postulo est diligo!

:rose: Love is like oxygen, love is a many splendored thing, love lifts us up where we belong, all you need is love!
:iconaustrailian-dragon:
u welkum :icongrinclub:

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How many bites does it take to get to the chewy center of a cupcake..? owo;
:iconpurrfection67:
This is pretty amazing, Gin! It really rings true with me, too. I can understand what it's like to waste time worrying about stuff you can't even control.

It made me think. Nice job! :heart:

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Salva me, Salvabo te

OBAMA FOR PRESIDENT!
:iconginger-paws:
^^ woo!

Remind me to show you the final one I handed in... I changed it.

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:rose: Diligo est amo oxygen , diligo est a plures species res , diligo levo nos sursum qua nos belong , totus vos postulo est diligo!

:rose: Love is like oxygen, love is a many splendored thing, love lifts us up where we belong, all you need is love!
:iconpurrfection67:
Okay! :)

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Salva me, Salvabo te

OBAMA FOR PRESIDENT!

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